The Flute

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life is like a flute It is riddled with holes and voids but, perform some rhythms. Written: July 16, 2021

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Valsa George

Date: 7/29/2022 4:19:00 AM

Beautiful haiku.... Though there are holes and void, life can produce beautiful rhythms like a flute !

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 7/18/2021 10:23:00 AM

Lovely, reminds me of James Galway and his melodious flute... Delice

L Milton Hankins

Date: 7/17/2021 9:28:00 AM

Ah, so true, Lasaad. And it takes a lot of breath to bring out the beautiful notes.

Sotto Poet
Date: 7/17/2021 9:39:00 AM

Exactly Milton and the breath symbolize our effort to succeed. Thanks for your kind words. Have a wonderful weekend.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/17/2021 6:25:00 AM

Awesome!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/16/2021 9:44:00 PM

A good player will astound all with the notes of the flute.

Sotto Poet
Date: 7/17/2021 6:27:00 AM

True, I’m not a good player though, will you be able to do it

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 7/16/2021 9:01:00 PM

This is absolutely stunning.

Sotto Poet
Date: 7/17/2021 6:28:00 AM

Thanks dear Rama, for the uplifting comment