The Flower That Survived

And to the flower that survived
                  I do salute thy strength 
Through wind and frost, to still have thrived
Advance at any length

Though thirsty for the taste of love
                              You held a barren field
With patience and the stars above
Your will to never yield  

Though some might say of brawny fare
That therein lies the ace
Yet I say, through your gentle care
                           Endurance wins the race

I know the flower that survived  
Though faded by the sun
                    Thy beauty still to be derived
From all that you have done



Dedicated to my dear, sweet mother…
(Still surviving!)


Happy Mother’s day
5/14/23
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Andresen Avatar
May 10, 2023 at 11:14 AM
- A lovely tribute to the world's best mother, Mike :) - hugs
Gentile Avatar
May 10, 2023 at 12:58 PM
Thanks so much Anne-Lise xxoo
Rose  Avatar
May 10, 2023 at 8:56 AM
Ah, this one touches my heart, through and through, mothers are special and so very dear to us. My mom is in heaven, so I sang her this song https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XpSZhE3crcY
Gentile Avatar
May 10, 2023 at 8:58 AM
Thank you Rose, I will check that out!!!
Legros Kelley Avatar
May 9, 2023 at 2:35 PM
Gosh Mike, how beautiful! Your mama sounds beautiful and strong <3 Happy Mother's Day to her :)
Gentile Avatar
May 9, 2023 at 7:42 PM
Thank you so much BJ!!!
M  Avatar
May 8, 2023 at 10:56 PM
Oh Mike….these words so full of love ,sweetness and pride for your mum touched my heart so deeply. You are both so lucky to have each other and l know she would be so proud of her son who has such a kind loving heart and is a beautiful sensitive soul…..your mum did well! Debx
Gentile Avatar
May 9, 2023 at 3:54 AM
Deb, thank you so much. I will pass this along to her when I present this poem to her on Sunday xxoo
Hawkins Avatar
May 8, 2023 at 3:06 PM
What a lovely Mother's Day gift. May your Mum survive for a long time and share happy times with you, Mike. Beautiful sentiments. Take care, Shirley
Gentile Avatar
May 8, 2023 at 5:17 PM
Thanks so much Shirley xxoo
Cunningham Avatar
May 8, 2023 at 10:17 AM
Lovely tribute to your Mother Mike, they are the bedrock of every family. Tom
Gentile Avatar
May 8, 2023 at 10:42 AM
Thank you Tom!!
Pandit Avatar
May 8, 2023 at 5:56 AM
Exuding love throughout. A lovely tribute to your mother, Mike.
Gentile Avatar
May 8, 2023 at 9:36 AM
Thank you Vijay!!
Seeker Avatar
May 8, 2023 at 5:34 AM
A beautiful tribute to your dear mom, Mike!
Gentile Avatar
May 8, 2023 at 9:36 AM
Thank you so much!!
Lane Avatar
May 8, 2023 at 4:59 AM
How beautifully you honor your mother, Mike. Women find strength within themselves when need arises, and we give it to other flowers of our kind when their petals begin to wilt.
Gentile Avatar
May 8, 2023 at 9:36 AM
Thank you so much Lin xxoo
Turner Avatar
May 8, 2023 at 4:56 AM
I love it, Mike, Tell her Happy Mother's Day for me:)
Gentile Avatar
May 8, 2023 at 9:36 AM
Thank you Daniel!!
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