The Flower I Water Too Much

The Flower I Water Too Much

They say too much water drowns the root of the flower you love —
I pour the whole sky into her smile, wrung from my veins, like an eclipse,
and the world dims itself shyly, a lantern begging for its own darkness,
when she smiles, time bends, and the pollen falls backward, toward the stem.

Her laughter is a swarm of bees made of sound, caught in a honeycomb of clouds,
the clouds lean in, gentle thieves, to steal a drop of its wild honey,
and carry it across a sky like a mute map, drawn only out of echoes,
while I stay below, a castaway on an island made of her memory.

Her dimples are bottomless wells, carved into her cheek by a careless angel,
the compasses of wandering hearts lose their north and drown inside them,
a glance becomes a root, a thought becomes the vine that binds you,
and my eyes, rudderless ships, choose gladly to be lost.

It's unfair how a thing so small holds all the tides of the world inside it,
how one fine curve of lips turns a moment into living, pulsing amber —
I drift psychedelic through her dream, smoke that's lost the way back to its body,
and every ordinary minute freezes into a silent, precious stone.

So if loving a flower too much turns my sap into the flood that drowns it,
what do I do with this admiration that blooms on its own, every time she smiles?
I let it burn in me like a star already dead, but still giving light,
or I drown in her, knowing every beautiful garden carries its drought within.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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