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The Flower Head

The Flower Head

I see a flower floating down the middle of the stream
It causes me to stop in my walk.
Why a flower floating alone, what a strange scene
The petals all tight, just the flower head, and no stalk.

Did it drop or was it cast just, like the proverbial bread?
It bobbed up and down disappeared and then returned
I saw some petals had separated from the head.
They started to drift from the flower as it churned.
And the gap grew wider and wider
Soon it was so wide it couldn’t be closed, the water a real divider.

It made me think was it me as the flower head spun in the stream
Was I the head were my petals my friends?
We stick together through life’s rich pattern and schemes
I watch for a while but the stream bends

When the going gets tough and the water gets rough
Some petals break away and drift off
But some stick on the head and the water they tread
They will stick with the head, and at life’s troubles they scoff.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Horsman Avatar
October 12, 2013 at 10:39 AM
How the hell did i miss this one, we talk of psychological aspects in our lives, and your poetry is truly in harmony with all of that,,, this is amazing poetry Mandy... a personification in poetry, no one does it better than you,,, your intelligence is mind boggling ... oh and i just love this poem...
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December 5, 2012 at 12:12 PM
Dear Mandy, I know I read this yesterday but I don't know why I did not comment. Anyway I think this is one of YOUR best works so far,the petals staying with the flower head being YOUR Everlasting Friends. I am the one on the bottom (I hope) LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal (Young) Liege...Harry
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December 5, 2012 at 12:14 PM
Mandy, Sorry about the double it said my code was wrong...Harry
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December 5, 2012 at 12:11 PM
Dear Mandy, I know I read this yesterday but I don't know why I did not comment. Anyway I think this is one of YOUR best works so far,the petals staying with the flower head being YOUR Everlasting Friends. I am the one on the bottom (I hope) LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal (Young) Liege...Harry
M V Avatar
December 9, 2011 at 8:36 PM
A beautiful poem with brilliant end,Mandy.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 10, 2011 at 3:55 AM
Why thankyou Fabiyas, much appreciated x
Dietrich Avatar
December 9, 2011 at 10:26 AM
that stalwart flower head must just keep moving on and being strong! An interesting analogy poem, Mandy.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 10, 2011 at 3:55 AM
Thanks Andrea x
Brown Avatar
December 9, 2011 at 8:36 AM
Oh my Mandy the words are flowing onto the paper today for you aren't they.. Love this one. Love, Carol
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 9, 2011 at 9:02 AM
Thanks Carol x
Falotico Avatar
December 9, 2011 at 7:16 AM
You have placed the reader right in this scene.. so much comes from this Piece.. and leaves the reader on the same ride as the flower... very much enjoy your talent today.... xoox Michael
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 9, 2011 at 9:03 AM
thanks Michael, lovely comment x
Song Avatar
December 9, 2011 at 4:54 AM
Are u walkin on a tight rope in your Avatar? I can't tell....hmmmmm. curious.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 9, 2011 at 4:58 AM
Parachute.x
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