The Fleeting Catch

The rain came down,
The pond overflowed
Through village paths.
The fishes, reared with patient care
Swarmed to freedom.

They darted through rills and drains,
Caught in casting nets,
Some speared in the yards,
Where rushing streams swept by.

The farmer, with hurried stride
Through drains and rills,
Tried to catch fish,
Casting his gaze with weary aim,
Pondering where the fishes gone .
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Velasco Avatar
August 25, 2025 at 6:22 PM
I really enjoyed this piece! The images of rain, rushing streams, and the farmer’s search for the fishes felt so vivid.
Singh Avatar
August 25, 2025 at 8:28 PM
Thank you
Andresen Avatar
August 25, 2025 at 6:36 AM
- Sounds like a lot of rain... no fish for the farmer this time - Very well written :) - hugs
Singh Avatar
August 25, 2025 at 8:27 PM
Thank uou
May Avatar
August 24, 2025 at 9:45 AM
They found freedom in the rain
Singh Avatar
August 25, 2025 at 8:27 PM
Thank you
Dietrich Avatar
August 23, 2025 at 8:33 AM
What an image! All those flailing fish! Good one
Singh Avatar
August 25, 2025 at 8:27 PM
Thank you
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