Subimal Sinha-Roy Poet Senryu

The Flecked Face

journey is ending
tired face flecked with twilight tinge…
spider spins cobweb

March 18, 2019
Syllable count : 5/7/5
Checked on howmanysyllable.com
Contest : Writing Challenge 3 - March 2019-Senryu
Sponsor : Dear Heart

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Eve Roper March 20, 2019 at 7:05 PM Subimal, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`* Subimal Sinha-Roy March 22, 2019 at 1:13 AM Thank you, Eve.

Constance La France March 20, 2019 at 4:45 PM Subimal, congratulations on your win in my contest with this excellent Senryu ~ Subimal Sinha-Roy March 22, 2019 at 1:13 AM Thank you, Constance for the placement.

Anne-Lise Andresen March 20, 2019 at 2:49 PM - Congratulations on your great win, Subimal :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Subimal Sinha-Roy March 22, 2019 at 1:13 AM Thank you, Anne-Lise.

Andrea Dietrich March 19, 2019 at 6:34 PM Subimal, this is beautiful but if for her senryu contest, she said not to mention nature, only human things! Subimal Sinha-Roy March 22, 2019 at 1:12 AM Thank you, Andrea.