The Flame of Thoughts

A red rose blowing on fidelity's bow
With the glow of grace, affection and love
Alive to afflictions not only for show
Enchanting like poetry, peaceful like dove

An edifice of goodness, embodiment of truth
Epitome of generosity, magnanimous and great
A balm sought after for wounds to soothe
A flame making afflictions evaporate

Neither a praise nor gratitude desires
With me in the horizon of thoughts flies
And even my flaws and faults admires
Unshaken in faith, how hard one tries

Not perfect like angels, not pious like saints
My idol, a human, in entirety
An artwork of excellence may also have dents
But the ocean of friendship be boundless and free

Carve me a red rose, oh chisel of thought!
And dip it in the perfume of features profound
To fit the excellence of model I sought
Let the world say true friendship is found
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Dietrich Avatar
January 14, 2013 at 2:42 PM
what a beautiful write on friendship. I know that for me, friends are so very important. I rarely visit FB but will try to remember to look up this post you told me about next time I go on.
Mccall Avatar
April 19, 2009 at 10:12 AM
I love the way this poem flows we all must have friends..I have one for 32 yrs and I cherish her. Blessings
Guzzi Avatar
April 1, 2009 at 12:50 PM
The last verse is priceless. The whole is most excellent!
P. Avatar
March 16, 2009 at 4:05 AM
thank you ... i really am so inspired by the way you choose a rose to bring the message through... you word flow is wonderful and i love this form... rhymes express one like no other! so much truth and gentleness to this write! thank you for your thoughts on my write! ~ Arany
B Raju Avatar
September 29, 2008 at 7:00 AM
Hi Mohammad, As always i am floored by the flow of your poem and the thoughts behind them. It is lovely. regards, rupavardhini
Mckenzie Avatar
August 13, 2008 at 3:52 PM
Mohammed here here WOW what a write I do so look foward to seeing what your writes. Congratulations on your featured poem of the week! Laura :)
Winter Avatar
August 11, 2008 at 9:35 AM
Congratulations Mohammad on this awesome write being featured once again. Love, Shar
Jordan Avatar
August 11, 2008 at 5:05 AM
Congrats on your poem being featured this week - really enjoyed the read - God Bless
Brown Avatar
August 11, 2008 at 3:52 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry once again being featured this week . Love, Carol
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August 10, 2008 at 5:45 PM
Congrats Mohammad on the re-feature. Vince
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