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The Five Seven Five Slide

The Five Seven Five Slide... ;) A Poem by Debbie_Philly " A Series Of Senryus that I have written some time ago.... Winds of change blow by Through my hair into my heart Now it is welcomed Just let go tonight The moon will carry you through The darkest of nights All the lines are there For you to reach out and take any time you want Sounds of the night dance Shaking the foundation strong Will stop the silence My eyes are heavy The slumbering winds call me Cozy is my bed A Series Of Senryus By: Debbie Mills Kelly ( Debbie Philly)

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Johnny Rhinem

Date: 1/31/2014 1:12:00 PM

This Is Beautiful Debbie, And The Opening Stanza Or Verse One Should Say, Speaks In Tones Of Something Very Lovely ~ 'The Slumbering Winds...I Like That And Your Title Has A Certain Chime Unto Itself ? Welcome Unto Her Loving Soup ~ Love John

Debbie Mills-Kelly
Date: 2/2/2014 11:21:00 PM

Thank you so much Johnny... I will be making my way over to your page as well.. Im happy you enjoyed :)

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/30/2014 11:59:00 PM

These five senryu entries are all a pleasure to read. Good job Debbie.

Debbie Mills-Kelly
Date: 1/31/2014 12:48:00 PM

Thank you so much Robert for reading me truly !!

Chris Boskovski

Date: 1/30/2014 11:23:00 PM

Wow Debbie what amazing talent you have here, I'm not just saying that to make you blush either! lol These senryus were amazing and so full of emotion and heart! :) great job Debbie, I'm glad I stopped by and gave you a read! :) xoxo

Debbie Mills-Kelly
Date: 1/31/2014 12:48:00 PM

WOW Chris thank you.... your review has lifted my spirits today :) Thank you very much I will be over tonight to read your poetry as well :)