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The Five Seven Five Slide

The Five Seven Five Slide... ;)

A Poem by Debbie_Philly 
" A Series Of Senryus that I have written some time ago....

Winds of change blow by
Through my hair into my heart
Now it is welcomed


Just let go tonight
The moon will carry you through
The darkest of nights


All the lines are there
For you to reach out and take
any time you want


Sounds of the night dance
Shaking the foundation strong
Will stop the silence



My eyes are heavy
The slumbering winds call me
Cozy is my bed


A Series Of Senryus By: Debbie Mills Kelly ( Debbie Philly)

Copyright © Debbie Mills-Kelly | Year Posted 2014

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Johnny Rhinem Date: 1/31/2014 1:12:00 PM This Is Beautiful Debbie, And The Opening Stanza Or Verse One Should Say, Speaks In Tones Of Something Very Lovely ~ 'The Slumbering Winds...I Like That And Your Title Has A Certain Chime Unto Itself ? Welcome Unto Her Loving Soup ~ Love John Login to Reply Debbie Mills-Kelly Date: 2/2/2014 11:21:00 PM Thank you so much Johnny... I will be making my way over to your page as well.. Im happy you enjoyed :)

Robert Pettit Date: 1/30/2014 11:59:00 PM These five senryu entries are all a pleasure to read. Good job Debbie. Login to Reply Debbie Mills-Kelly Date: 1/31/2014 12:48:00 PM Thank you so much Robert for reading me truly !!

Chris Boskovski Date: 1/30/2014 11:23:00 PM Wow Debbie what amazing talent you have here, I'm not just saying that to make you blush either! lol These senryus were amazing and so full of emotion and heart! :) great job Debbie, I'm glad I stopped by and gave you a read! :) xoxo Login to Reply Debbie Mills-Kelly Date: 1/31/2014 12:48:00 PM WOW Chris thank you.... your review has lifted my spirits today :) Thank you very much I will be over tonight to read your poetry as well :)