The Fish Know I'M Coming

The fish know I’m coming

Turtles line the logs
Swans parade in pre-game frenzy
Geese honk from the cheep seats
Muskrat groundskeepers tend the “field”
Bullfrog-voiced announcers “harrumph” the goings on
Dragonfly vendors work the crowd

The fish know I’m coming

The game is on…….


John G .Lawless
©6/11/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Smith Avatar
June 13, 2017 at 9:25 PM
One word tip"Dynamite"...tha'll teach um
Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 13, 2017 at 12:54 PM
I like the scene you have set :)
Sands Avatar
June 13, 2017 at 8:34 AM
I can just see it , hear it and feel like I am right there with how you wrote this. Well done :)
Turner Avatar
June 13, 2017 at 7:37 AM
Don't forget the mosquitoes and those tree bass. Got an extra boat cushion? Really fun read, John:)
Green Avatar
June 13, 2017 at 7:33 AM
Very cool John. I like the set up in this and how you have created a sporting event featuring natures creatures in the key roles as you stroll up to the bank ready to cast.
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