The Fish

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=zkmzKbwAbL4


A little fish was swimming  in the pool
"It is so nice! It is so cool!
The water’s clean  and very hot
Do you believe me, my friends, or not?"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Fleming Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 6:08 AM
Hhmmm...I suppose it depends in which part of the world it is swimming? Intriguing! Best regards, Victoria, and - Cheers! :) john
Mcconnell Avatar
August 19, 2017 at 5:21 PM
Nice little piece Victoria, good rhyme too maybe could have done with more expanse but good penning. Blessings Gordon
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