The Firstborn Poem

The firstborn poem kicks, emerges struggling
                                 ~ not so the second; it's chill
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Krutsinger Avatar
March 7, 2019 at 5:52 AM
It is funny that oftentimes the first one I throw down is my favorite, so I guess I am going backwards?
Wolf Avatar
March 7, 2019 at 1:26 PM
Perhaps, or just having dessert first, or something like that. That is quite interesting. Obviously, I'm precisely the opposite: The first one (of the day) takes forever, and after that, they just come sliding out (usually). :) gw
Bangalee Avatar
March 7, 2019 at 12:19 AM
good from the second!
Wolf Avatar
March 7, 2019 at 1:24 PM
Ha, ha, my friend. Very clever, insightful comment! Thank you so much, Mahtab! :) gw
Faulkner Avatar
March 6, 2019 at 10:34 PM
Hmm, for some reason I read this as 'first hand poem' - which makes me think 'second-hand poem' - I may do something with that!
Wolf Avatar
March 6, 2019 at 10:44 PM
It's tired and you're getting late, perhaps... LOL. Thanks for commenting, and g.l. with your second-hand poem idea! :) gw
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