The Firstborn Poem

The firstborn poem kicks, emerges struggling ~ not so the second; it's chill

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/7/2019 5:52:00 AM

It is funny that oftentimes the first one I throw down is my favorite, so I guess I am going backwards?

Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/7/2019 1:26:00 PM

Perhaps, or just having dessert first, or something like that. That is quite interesting. Obviously, I'm precisely the opposite: The first one (of the day) takes forever, and after that, they just come sliding out (usually). :) gw

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 3/7/2019 12:19:00 AM

good from the second!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/7/2019 1:24:00 PM

Ha, ha, my friend. Very clever, insightful comment! Thank you so much, Mahtab! :) gw

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 3/6/2019 10:34:00 PM

Hmm, for some reason I read this as 'first hand poem' - which makes me think 'second-hand poem' - I may do something with that!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/6/2019 10:44:00 PM

It's tired and you're getting late, perhaps... LOL. Thanks for commenting, and g.l. with your second-hand poem idea! :) gw