The First Time

what can compare
to the first time feel
your baby’s move
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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February 19, 2016 at 10:42 AM
Hi Charles is this supposed to read. with the double THE THE? Someone sent me to your page and Debbie's. I'm just passing through. CT
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February 19, 2016 at 11:32 AM
Thanks for the correction.
Sankey- Lewis Avatar
February 2, 2016 at 6:54 AM
Wow. An invitation to think and feel.
Crocker Avatar
January 21, 2016 at 8:19 PM
Beautiful poem and sentiment.
Lane Avatar
January 21, 2016 at 7:09 PM
Absolutely nothing, Charles.
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