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The First Time

The First Time

A brooding forest illuminated by a wishful recitation, 
Errantly proffered, for woodland creature's, to savor, 
A humble soul, who is slow in the course of courting, 
A supportive procedure, of airy words to practice by.

Nimble eyes brashly grazed the overworn paper,
Promising to thoughts sake, of multiple repeats,
Apprehensive importuned by that thawing hour,
As the momentous occurrence, developed itself.

Yon floweret holds neath dangling mistletoe,
Her fervent fragrance burst to exude scents,
Ventured out eagerly entice the staled nose,
Urbane sweet-smelling embrace a new year.

The sweet nothings poured first from his lips,
To tendered labyrinths to absorb and exist in,
The elder minds remember and youth fickles,
Naught this brave budding cause for he begs.

So he gathers the courage to submissiveness,
With both hands behind his back and yield . . .
. . . fingers crossed, he leans in towards her too,
favors a kiss to be in-kind, she willfully responds.

. . .  two as one . . .  for the first time.

2020 January 17

What Are Your Wishes

*7th Place*

Second Chances N-A Poems From My Contests Only Part I
~~Chantelle Anne Cooke

*2nd Place*

Writing Prompt - Take the Dagger Out
~~Constance La France
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Kauffman Avatar
September 28, 2020 at 9:00 AM
Such a sweet picture, William. The image of the guy with his hands behind his back leaning in for that first kiss is so tender. Congratulations on your winning placement.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
September 28, 2020 at 9:47 AM
Memorable times that many shared, thanks Sam, much appreciated, Aloha! William
La France Avatar
February 22, 2020 at 5:53 PM
William, wonderful poem and congratulations on your win in my contest _Constance
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
February 22, 2020 at 7:09 PM
Happy be your days, Constance, and I am grateful for your share of it with me -- Aloha!~@wk
Kauffman Avatar
February 19, 2020 at 10:24 PM
Such a sweet recounting of a first kiss beneath the mistletoe! Congratulations William.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
February 19, 2020 at 10:34 PM
Firstly, my extended courtesies, Sam, and a point of fact, my compliments likewise my friend, -- Aloha!~@wk
Chiri Avatar
January 26, 2020 at 4:57 AM
William congrats on your wonderful win!;)
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
January 26, 2020 at 5:19 AM
Thank you Brenda!~@wk
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 18, 2020 at 1:09 PM
Hello William Kekaula, oh how nice to get her first kiss. Aloha! Darlene
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
January 18, 2020 at 1:11 PM
Yes Darlene it certainly was Aloha~@wk
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