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A toaster can be shocking and it just might take your life. You might someday poke yourself with spoon or fork or knife. Tripping on a stairway, could also end your days, to count the chance to leave this world, there are so many ways. But worry not the little things or what your mind pretends; the first thing on your mind all day, should not be how it ends.

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Date: 3/5/2021 10:07:00 PM
I love the premise of the poem. Life should be about the good things in the moment and those that could be made! Awesome!
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Date: 3/5/2021 2:12:00 PM
Very true, if we pondered on all the ways we could die, we would never leave the house. Regardless it's still a scary concept to get your head around! Best not to think about it. I enjoyed your poem. Have a nice day.
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