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The First Thanksgiving

steal their land then dine with them.... no reservations needed **for Chris Aechtner's Yet Another Senryu contest

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T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet

Date: 9/26/2010 9:13:00 AM

Great read Deb.Congrats on your 5th.place win.Teresa

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 9/23/2010 2:29:00 AM

Wonderful turnabout and truthful use of the words. Congrats, Deb, on your win . Dan C

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/21/2010 6:35:00 AM

interesting poem this,enjoyed, congrats to you. Harry

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/21/2010 4:24:00 AM

Congratulations Deb on your win in Chris D. Aechtner's contest "Not Another Senyru Contest!". Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/20/2010 10:56:00 PM

this one was one of my favorites of all!!! Congrats. Luv, Andrea PS oh, I just saw JAmes thought so too. It should have gotten second or first place as well!!

James Fraser

Date: 9/20/2010 3:15:00 PM

Deb, this is my personal fav, it captures a sad period in history so well. I'm so glad it is on the winners podium, and it's heading to my favs. Many congratulations on your wonderful win >> James :)

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 9/20/2010 2:52:00 PM

A wonderful Senryu, congratulations on a well deserved win. Caryl

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/20/2010 2:10:00 PM

This was my favorite, Deb. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/20/2010 1:27:00 PM

Congratulations on this nice win in the contest, Deb

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 9/20/2010 12:37:00 PM

This sure is pretty clever-- and that last line is just awesome ;)-- Super congrats on your win, Deb :)-- nikko :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/20/2010 11:53:00 AM

Congrats Deb on your super win in the Senryu contest.. an awesome victory .. enjoy my friend with luv..

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/20/2010 10:26:00 AM

I love this one, one of my favourites, congrats on your win in the contest

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/16/2010 9:01:00 PM

And that last line even has a double meaning for me. I think Chris is gonna be really delighted with THIS one. I know I am!! Luv, Andrea

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/16/2010 10:17:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your poetry today Deb. Hope you have a wonderful day. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/15/2010 1:54:00 PM

Great entry for Chris's contest Deb, best wishes :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/15/2010 1:15:00 PM

Brilliant, Deb!! Sadly, this is just what ended up happening to the tribes who brought their feast to Jamestown and welcomed the early settlers. GREAT last line! Best wishes in Chris's contest. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/15/2010 12:41:00 PM

Wow Deb this is a great one ..good luck in the contest... awesome reminder.. enjoyed ...

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/15/2010 12:13:00 PM

hahaha, got that one right, good luck in the contest

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 9/15/2010 12:07:00 PM

A very nice Senyru, good luck in the contest. Caryl