The First Tear

I'm just one tiny tear
amidst the sea 
of your eye
So many are surrendered
when emotional tides 
are high

But not I
I have a different plan
I will not be just another tear lost
My entrance will be grand

I represent all in life
that which we cannot see
I'm the salty taste of bittersweet,
the liquid form of sympathy


The light spring shower of laughter
the endless sea of love
the strength of overflowing tears
 the power of just one

I am welling up
as now it is my time
I will represent your past
Your present and your prime

I’ll be your first tear as a woman
Your last tear as a girl
The tear that got to witness
The total eclipse of your world

And as you blink
I gently fall
The tides are getting higher now
But I was the first tear to fall
and land upon your baby’s brow

by: Nicole Hawkins
written for "Personify a Tear" contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 4/7/2011 9:08:00 AM
This is a beautiful write. Like Carolyn i like the expression "liquid form of sympathy..." So descriptive. Best wishes in the contest em :)
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Date: 4/4/2011 9:55:00 PM
what a unique way to present your FIRST tear. Wonderful idea. I love this one!
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Date: 4/4/2011 8:59:00 AM
A "liquid form of sympathy..." what a great line, Nicole. And that next to last verse is absolutely amazing! Terrific entry for HG's contest. You really have a gift for words. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/3/2011 8:41:00 AM
Just beautiful and a little different. Should be a winner. BG
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Date: 4/3/2011 7:14:00 AM
Very nice Nicole, a excellent entry and write for the contest....Michael
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