The First Snow

the bluebird shines
watching the falling snow
nestled in cotton trees
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Roberts Avatar
October 9, 2010 at 11:10 PM
pretty haiku, congrats on your HM in the contest Larry
Fraser Avatar
October 9, 2010 at 7:40 AM
Congratulations Larry on your win in Andrea's Animal Haiku contest with this beautiful poetry >> James
Sweetheart Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 1:51 PM
Congrats Larry on your HM in Andrea's contest with this wonderful entry ..so very visual and breathtaking..luv.. enjoy a special honor today with luv..
Devonshire Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 1:35 PM
oH, this one's awesome, Larry! Congratulations doesn't seem to be enough for the impact of this image. Love, Carolyn
Brown Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 9:36 AM
Congratulations Larry on your win in Andrea Dietrich's contest. Love, Carol
Freeman Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 8:29 AM
Congratulations Larry on your hm. Agape, Moses
Mehta Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 5:55 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest, Larry
Dietrich Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 3:57 AM
Congrats for your HM, Larry. Your HM was one of the prettiest of the bunch. I loved the idea of the blue bird shining in the snow. LUv, Andrea
Taylor Avatar
October 3, 2010 at 1:36 PM
Beautiful haiku, my friend. Enjoyed. Have a great week. Ralph
Mehta Avatar
October 2, 2010 at 6:30 AM
Nice personification Larry
Mehta Avatar
October 1, 2010 at 3:09 PM
Veyr enjoyable haiku as always from you, Larry
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