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The First Poem

God is a finely honed machine You are born just to be replaced Your smile will smile once more But on someone else's face

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 6/24/2019 8:40:00 AM
Hi John: Your first poem is an example how many more I can read as this one is so original!
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John Bertin
Date: 7/20/2019 9:16:00 PM
Thank you, sorry I took so long to reply; I'm not on Soup a lot.

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