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The First of Anything

It dropped white suddenly,
As predicted.
The empty air embraced it; 
Faced it 
With the recognition
of love.
In the quiet 
It would seem forever.
The birds knew.
We counted thirteen 
In the closest tree.
Unsettled,
They seemed to dance 
With the restless joy 
Of children.
They knew 
That what we think of 
As the beginning,
Always comes in the middle.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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December 14, 2020 at 7:56 PM
I just love this poem! A fave!
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December 15, 2020 at 3:16 PM
Thank you Mikey! xomo
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December 15, 2020 at 12:20 PM
thank you maureen, reading your portfolio is like being in a candy store. So many favorites. I never really understood what "condensed milk" was but now I see in your writings: "condensed wisdom". I really like your writing, it is so to the heart of the matter and the heart of what matters. Thanks for the acknowledgement. Mikey.
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