The First Easter

He closed his eyes
And died in pain;
But like the sun,
He rose again.

Jack Horne for Linda-Marie’s Easter Inspirations contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
April 10, 2012 at 6:33 AM
A belated congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's "Easter Inspiration" contest Jack. Love, Carol
Merryman Avatar
April 6, 2012 at 12:20 PM
So glad this was a winner. Congrats, Jack! Love Kim Have a blessed Easter.
Williams Avatar
April 6, 2012 at 12:13 PM
Jack congrats on your win..like it..David
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April 6, 2012 at 9:23 AM
I new this short piece would do well, Jack. Congratulations on your win! It's nice sharing the same place with you. Love, Carolyn
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April 6, 2012 at 1:59 AM
Congratulations Jack, a wonderful piece, short and sweet xx
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April 5, 2012 at 6:39 PM
This really packs a lot in a few words. Impressive. Congratulations.
Johnson Avatar
April 5, 2012 at 5:49 PM
Congratulations on your concise description of the first Easter and your win. Love, Joyce
Sweetheart Avatar
April 5, 2012 at 5:13 PM
congrats Jack on a marvelous entry of imagination mixed with gospel truth.. and a great win for u luv.. appreciate support always..
Ball Avatar
April 1, 2012 at 9:46 AM
Oh WoW! Jack! Great job here. So much said in so few words. Excellent. God Bless and Happy Easter, JB
Wesley Avatar
March 27, 2012 at 9:30 AM
Sensitive and so full of feeling. A verse to lift one's spirit!
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March 26, 2012 at 1:02 AM
Beautiful, Jack! Your poem says so much in a few words. I love it...Blessings, Rhonda
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March 25, 2012 at 11:19 PM
Jack... this is a very good verse..for the contest..good luck ....take care and have yourself a good night~LUV*PD
Kendrick Avatar
March 25, 2012 at 5:48 PM
Very expressive work about Jesus' death and burial and resurrection...Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Sivey Avatar
March 25, 2012 at 4:12 PM
Wow Jack, I knew you had it in you and you brought it out for all of us to see! This poem is so beautiful I am amazed at its beauty! As Kim said you said so much in so few words...a sign of a true poet! I really enjoyed your poem that I have read this evening! Great Work!!
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March 25, 2012 at 3:55 PM
I really like this, Jack. You said so much in so little words. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Kim
Devonshire Avatar
March 25, 2012 at 3:48 PM
So simple and yet so meaningful, Jack. I would rank this one very high! Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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