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The First Day

The first day This is the first dawn, This is the first breeze, This is the first aroma, Through the trees, through the water, through the light, Through some sound coming from the birds, Through the street, Which will take you to the most pleasant morning of your life. This is what you tried, To create by thoughts, Intended to look by eyes. This was somewhere in between of character of yours Today, Like it was always, is the first day of rest of your life. Today you are not just exposed To this pleasant morning, You are exposing to the power to feel This extreme pleasure in you. Somehow, someday you will make realize all this to someone Someone lovable to you Eventually by your face, By your eyes, Or By yours words………………… Akash Puri Goswami……………………

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/21/2016 6:32:00 PM
Akash, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/29/2015 6:21:00 PM
AKASH, a pleasure to read :) HAVE YOURSELF A HAPPY NEW YEAR ...... SKAT LOVE
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Date: 2/10/2014 5:39:00 AM
Akash this is a beautiful write....David
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Date: 2/11/2014 5:26:00 AM
thanks david .......
Date: 2/9/2014 1:27:00 PM
The center of your being depends on the present and the past... Good write... Verlena
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Date: 2/11/2014 5:25:00 AM
thanks verlena.... for thoughtful read....
Date: 2/9/2014 1:20:00 PM
- Think about those words every morning: "is the first day of rest of your life" - Lovely written poem - I like it a lot Akash !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/11/2014 5:22:00 AM
thank you anne for appreciation... I will make most of my days.... --akash
Date: 2/9/2014 7:59:00 AM
Well written my new friend... more please! Cheers, Jack
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Date: 2/11/2014 5:19:00 AM
thank you ..jack.. I will write more for sure...... --akash

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