Akash Puri Goswami Poet Dramatic Verse

The First Day

The first day

This is the first dawn,
This is the first breeze,
This is the first aroma,
Through the trees, through the water, through the light,
Through some sound coming from the birds,
 
Through the street,
Which will take you to the most pleasant morning of your life.
This is what you tried,
To create by thoughts,
Intended to look by eyes.

This was somewhere in between of character of yours
Today,
Like it was always, is the first day of rest of your life.

Today you are not just exposed
To this pleasant morning,
You are exposing to the power to feel 
This extreme pleasure in you.

Somehow, someday you will make realize all this to someone
Someone lovable to you
Eventually by your face, 
By your eyes,
Or 
By yours words…………………
                              Akash Puri Goswami……………………

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Beata Agustin September 16, 2024 at 5:58 AM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A February 21, 2016 at 6:32 PM Akash, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA

Skat A December 29, 2015 at 6:21 PM AKASH, a pleasure to read :) HAVE YOURSELF A HAPPY NEW YEAR ...... SKAT LOVE

David Williams February 10, 2014 at 5:39 AM Akash this is a beautiful write....David Akash Puri Goswami February 11, 2014 at 5:26 AM thanks david .......

Verlena S. Walker February 9, 2014 at 1:27 PM The center of your being depends on the present and the past... Good write... Verlena Akash Puri Goswami February 11, 2014 at 5:25 AM thanks verlena.... for thoughtful read....

Anne-Lise Andresen February 9, 2014 at 1:20 PM - Think about those words every morning: "is the first day of rest of your life" - Lovely written poem - I like it a lot Akash !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Akash Puri Goswami February 11, 2014 at 5:22 AM thank you anne for appreciation... I will make most of my days.... --akash

Jack Ellison February 9, 2014 at 7:59 AM Well written my new friend... more please! Cheers, Jack Akash Puri Goswami February 11, 2014 at 5:19 AM thank you ..jack.. I will write more for sure...... --akash