The First American In Space

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The First American In Space Charted expanse amidst constellations, Strokes faraway Monet craft distinctions, Obscured impel echoes an emptied choice, Shepard favors Frost's view, narrative voice. 2021 April 13

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Funom Makama

Date: 4/27/2021 7:57:00 PM

Beautifully written with so much grace. Your lines are thick with craft and fascination. Great work.

Hilo Poet
Date: 4/27/2021 8:52:00 PM

Heartfelt gratitude, Funom, and I hope to articulate your thoughtful words via my extentia of your taxing contest, albeit, e'er possible mon ami, Aloha!