William Kelii Kekaula Poet Rhyme

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The First American In Space

The First American In Space

Charted expanse amidst constellations,
Strokes faraway Monet craft distinctions,
Obscured impel echoes an emptied choice,
Shepard favors Frost's view, narrative voice.

2021 April 13

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Funom Makama April 27, 2021 at 7:57 PM Beautifully written with so much grace. Your lines are thick with craft and fascination. Great work. William Kelii Kekaula April 27, 2021 at 8:52 PM Heartfelt gratitude, Funom, and I hope to articulate your thoughtful words via my extentia of your taxing contest, albeit, e'er possible mon ami, Aloha!