The First

She’s kind of startling
Like the tiny gasp before a kiss
A breath of wind 
Spontaneous and unexpected.
She's the fall after the jump
When I've used up my three wishes.

I'm a magnet for the broken
Or those who will leave me shattered.
She is neither,
Constantly walking on clouds
Head in the sky

While I trip over my words
And land at her feet.
I look in her eyes a bit too long
And I can’t pull away.

They are full of something, 
Something I don’t know 
Yet.
But I will try to learn her
I doubt everything
Everything
But her.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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October 11, 2017 at 2:47 AM
Ooohhh Iris, this is more than beautiful. Sometimes you write a poem that I wish I would have written, this is one of those... That first stanza! She must be someone VERY special :)
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October 11, 2017 at 1:01 PM
Thank you! Thank you so much, you have no idea how much those words mean to me. And yes she is someone very special. I hope she will realize just how special soon.
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October 5, 2017 at 9:30 PM
Perfectly written. Great read
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October 6, 2017 at 11:22 AM
Thank you so much! Your praise means a lot. Have a nice day.
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October 5, 2017 at 4:49 PM
Well expressed Iris. Nice :)
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October 5, 2017 at 5:46 PM
Thank you so much! I appreciate your words, have a nice day!
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