The Firefly

her eyes caught its light
firefly- in the curtain, trapped
the wind freed them both
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Veetil Avatar
November 29, 2012 at 9:36 AM
The flicker of the firefly is almost felt..i liked the lines for its dense feeling .
West Avatar
November 29, 2012 at 8:57 AM
Welcome Elektra to PS, and a good write. Look forward to more. Rollo
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November 29, 2012 at 8:44 AM
Very nice with a good subject matter.
Brown Avatar
November 29, 2012 at 6:09 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Elektra. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. I am sorry it is so belated. Love, Carol
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