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The Firefly

her eyes caught its light firefly- in the curtain, trapped the wind freed them both

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Date: 11/29/2012 9:36:00 AM
The flicker of the firefly is almost felt..i liked the lines for its dense feeling .
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Date: 11/29/2012 8:57:00 AM
Welcome Elektra to PS, and a good write. Look forward to more. Rollo
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Date: 11/29/2012 8:44:00 AM
Very nice with a good subject matter.
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Date: 11/29/2012 6:09:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Elektra. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. I am sorry it is so belated. Love, Carol
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