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The Fire of Love

Passion heats the room, With flickering...midnight flames- On crackling bedsprings. ______________________________________ Inspired by Celene Crescent’s Senryu Desires

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/4/2010 12:15:00 PM
Great, sizzling Senryu, here, dear Raul. Email you have...(not SM)
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Date: 6/4/2010 9:24:00 AM
Well, I just read Celene's so which came first , the chicken or the egg? LOVE THIS. Andrea
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Date: 6/4/2010 3:54:00 AM
Passionate...Sara
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Date: 6/3/2010 12:19:00 PM
I'm honored my humble senryu was an inspiration to a great poet and artist like you. .So much passion here Raul,Exceptional senryu,with a great title,going to my favorites,the poet too!C elene
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Date: 6/3/2010 11:35:00 AM
Delightful Senyru Raul, terrific images and sounds resonate from your words >> James
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Date: 6/3/2010 9:09:00 AM
Crackling bed springs.... Nice..... The last line set the Senryu off my friend.... Good work.....:JP]
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Date: 6/3/2010 3:22:00 AM
Wonderful Raul, well done on the image. Have yourself a blessed day.-IRMA
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Date: 6/3/2010 3:20:00 AM
"Celene" said she missed you in the blog, Raul. She's not the only one. This is a wonderful tribute to her passionate style. Love, Carolyn
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