The Fire of Love

Passion heats the room,
With flickering...midnight flames-
On crackling bedsprings. 



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Inspired by Celene Crescent’s Senryu Desires
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Scripca Avatar
June 4, 2010 at 12:15 PM
Great, sizzling Senryu, here, dear Raul. Email you have...(not SM)
Dietrich Avatar
June 4, 2010 at 9:24 AM
Well, I just read Celene's so which came first , the chicken or the egg? LOVE THIS. Andrea
Kendrick Avatar
June 4, 2010 at 3:54 AM
Passionate...Sara
Bloomsfield Avatar
June 3, 2010 at 12:19 PM
I'm honored my humble senryu was an inspiration to a great poet and artist like you. .So much passion here Raul,Exceptional senryu,with a great title,going to my favorites,the poet too!C elene
Fraser Avatar
June 3, 2010 at 11:35 AM
Delightful Senyru Raul, terrific images and sounds resonate from your words >> James
Pickett Avatar
June 3, 2010 at 9:09 AM
Crackling bed springs.... Nice..... The last line set the Senryu off my friend.... Good work.....:JP]
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June 3, 2010 at 3:22 AM
Wonderful Raul, well done on the image. Have yourself a blessed day.-IRMA
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June 3, 2010 at 3:20 AM
"Celene" said she missed you in the blog, Raul. She's not the only one. This is a wonderful tribute to her passionate style. Love, Carolyn
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