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What are you doing? Going to the fridge? Fantastic, I’ll come along too! Oh wow, the door, you’re going to open it? Oh man, I love hanging out with you. Devon? Win! And a sausage from last night? We’re a team, do you now want to play? I know, I’ll go find and give you the toy, You know, the one that you throw away. Now where? Back to the couch? Yes, you’re my very best biggest mate, What’s that? You’re going to give me a rub, Your rubs are prize winning, they’re great. You’re the most biggest best friend of excitement and fun, You even drive me to the shops way down town, I love being beside you every bit of the day, You’re my fire that’s burning deep down. For Julie Leigh Rodeheaver's contest The fire Inside, written 10th November 2017. awarded 5th place

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Date: 12/2/2017 9:21:00 AM
I love this poem, Lewis. Wonderful perspective from our most faithful companion. Pure poetry, my friend. Love and joy always.
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Date: 11/22/2017 1:38:00 PM
so beautiful words "You’re my fire that’s burning deep down."
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Date: 11/22/2017 7:14:00 PM
thank you Muhammad.
Date: 11/14/2017 5:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your fine win, Lewis.
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Date: 11/16/2017 6:40:00 PM
thanks Greg
Date: 11/13/2017 10:55:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Lewis.
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Date: 11/14/2017 1:03:00 AM
Thankyou LG
Date: 11/12/2017 4:45:00 PM
what a charming take on the theme Lewis and I love the personification and the pic is adorable:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/12/2017 8:46:00 PM
thanks Jan, I love that dogs love till exhaustion. cheers :)
Date: 11/9/2017 8:32:00 PM
A very cute poem! Can feel the excitement!
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Date: 11/9/2017 9:14:00 PM
Dogs get so excited just by being with us. thanks Kim :)

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