The Fire Inside

...And in the core Burns a constant fire Insatiable energy source Providing life. Know the fire inside Constantly burning Insatiable energy of life Within the core of your being. Precious heart upon a ride Beating so fast a cadence And other times quite mild Let your love shine to no end.

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The Fringe

Date: 6/1/2011 7:09:00 PM

Amen, we believe so much in limitations, and you say "Insatiable energy source, providing life". Maybe this sources needs us to 'believe' in "unlimitations" (sorry I just invinted a new word). As I teach myself that people are not broken, but amazing cameras absorbing ideas of love and boundaries for the source. Sorry I went crazy again, but your words really make me think. If I'm competely off on my interpretations, sorry :) but another good write.

Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 5/18/2011 4:57:00 AM

Yes, we all have that fire inside...even if some of us are not always aware of it. Good, creative write.

Don Johnson

Date: 5/16/2011 8:03:00 PM

....Lovely verse sweet Caroline... constant fire insatiable time... yes we seem to come together... with our choices very clever word of mouth tapped on the puter minds do link subconcious tutor love Don

James Ph. Kotsybar

Date: 5/16/2011 12:07:00 PM

May your love shine to no end but with its beautiful purpose.

James Foulk

Date: 5/16/2011 10:27:00 AM

a well written piece of poetry, enjoyed it. thank you for commenting on Pine Cone Kissing Needles.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/16/2011 9:17:00 AM

very creative and thoughtful expressions on the fire inside, Caroline

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/16/2011 6:49:00 AM

A phenomenal piece Caroline.. causing thoughts of inner searching to find that fire burning bright.. awesome one my friend..luv..

Sarah Seraphin

Date: 5/16/2011 12:55:00 AM

* “'Precious Heart Upon A Ride' * Tis But The Story of Life Within * This Fragile & Temporal Place In Time * Dear Gifted & Beautiful * Caroline Cecile * I Perceive Such Soft * Caring & Sincere Love * In This Very Beautiful Poem * Which In Turn Causes Myself to Love Your Light * Very Truly * A Fave by A Beautiful Fave * Hugs & Kisses * Kisses & Hugs * Sarah” *