Brian Davey Poet Rhyme

The Fire and the Flame

The Fire & The Flame


                                    Intoxicated mind, head mind games,
                                   here is the theme in inebriated shame.
                                    Panicking, restless, exotic little lame,
                                  Art Decos in silent echoes take the blame.

                           Thoughtless printed portrait, brown leather frame,
                               Uncontrollable turmoil captured trained tame.
                              Then misery struck and all of evil took its aim,
                          all that's left my nemisis is not the fire just its flame.



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02/12/16

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Poet Destroyer A February 13, 2016 at 6:38 PM Brian, well expressed. The rhyme has a flow that gives the poem a straight read. Thoughtless printed portrait, I like the hint of alliteration on that line. ;) Happy Valentines to you..... XOX ~Love LINDA~ Poet Destroyer A February 17, 2016 at 12:05 PM Hi Brian, you are very sweet.... thank you for the kind reply to my comment. Have a nice day. LINDA Brian Davey February 15, 2016 at 12:08 AM Thank you for your input it makes me happy when I hear positive comments from you. HAPPY VALENTINES DAY TO you too

Winged Warrior February 13, 2016 at 8:36 AM Well written Brain...^WW^ Brian Davey February 13, 2016 at 5:52 PM Thanks for there comment and don't worry about the Brain thing it has happened a gazillion times throughout my life. Winged Warrior February 13, 2016 at 8:41 AM Sorry I meant Brian...damn keyboard...^WW^