Valsa George Poet Other

The Finishing Touch

With a stroke of the brush,
A dab of paint,
A portrait, I drew.
Blew into it the breath of life,
Lo! There it stays my Masterpiece


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Bite size poem No.26
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Sara Kendrick January 29, 2023 at 4:19 AM Ahh!! I enjoyed reading this one. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Victor Buhagiar November 10, 2021 at 10:48 PM Brevity is my weakness. You wrote a fine poem. Well done. Valsa George November 11, 2021 at 12:14 AM For me, brevity doesn't come naturally ! Verbosity is my weakness. I too love brevity. Glad for your beautiful comment, Victor !

Gershon Wolf November 10, 2021 at 7:04 PM I love how this is open to multiple interpretations, Valsa... Mine is that you are writing of the Creator Himself as well as the creator herself. Bravo, Gershon Valsa George November 10, 2021 at 9:27 PM I too love it.... ! Usually I am not good at brevity... ! Basically I am a long winded person in speech and writing.... ! (sad) Glad you liked my experiment !

Gordon Mcconnell November 10, 2021 at 3:11 PM Nice piece Valsa, good touch of brevity!Take care Gordon Valsa George November 10, 2021 at 6:01 PM Thanks a lot dear friend Gordon. Very delighted that you visited my page and dropped a beautiful comment !

Tom Cunningham November 10, 2021 at 3:00 PM Like the artist we paint portraits with our words, Good luck in the contest Valsa. Tom Valsa George November 10, 2021 at 6:03 PM Yes, poets are artists who paint pictures with words. Thank you very much, great story teller !

Vijay Pandit November 10, 2021 at 2:18 PM Awesome! I am saving this in my FAVES. Valsa George November 10, 2021 at 6:04 PM Feel greatly honored....! No words to thank you, Vijay !