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The Finishing Touch

With a stroke of the brush, A dab of paint, A portrait, I drew. Blew into it the breath of life, Lo! There it stays my Masterpiece
Your Preference Poetry Contest Brian Strand Bite size poem No.26 Sponsored by Line Gauthier

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Date: 1/29/2023 4:19:00 AM
Ahh!! I enjoyed reading this one. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 11/10/2021 10:48:00 PM
Brevity is my weakness. You wrote a fine poem. Well done.
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Valsa George
Date: 11/11/2021 12:14:00 AM
For me, brevity doesn't come naturally ! Verbosity is my weakness. I too love brevity. Glad for your beautiful comment, Victor !
Date: 11/10/2021 7:04:00 PM
I love how this is open to multiple interpretations, Valsa... Mine is that you are writing of the Creator Himself as well as the creator herself. Bravo, Gershon
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Valsa George
Date: 11/10/2021 9:27:00 PM
I too love it.... ! Usually I am not good at brevity... ! Basically I am a long winded person in speech and writing.... ! (sad) Glad you liked my experiment !
Date: 11/10/2021 3:11:00 PM
Nice piece Valsa, good touch of brevity!Take care Gordon
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Valsa George
Date: 11/10/2021 6:01:00 PM
Thanks a lot dear friend Gordon. Very delighted that you visited my page and dropped a beautiful comment !
Date: 11/10/2021 3:00:00 PM
Like the artist we paint portraits with our words, Good luck in the contest Valsa. Tom
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Valsa George
Date: 11/10/2021 6:03:00 PM
Yes, poets are artists who paint pictures with words. Thank you very much, great story teller !
Date: 11/10/2021 2:18:00 PM
Awesome! I am saving this in my FAVES.
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Valsa George
Date: 11/10/2021 6:04:00 PM
Feel greatly honored....! No words to thank you, Vijay !

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