The Finest Love

How may we definethe finest love
a love so sweet that could have only come 
from above.

Yet such a love has blown into my life it 
knocks me over and now makes me think 
twice.its like a knife stabbing at my soul 
without a love like this our storys untold.

you see these are two lives that are 
intertwined like deeply rooted grape vines 
along the lines of this page can not simply 
define an ever sweet love like mine.
its like a sip of the finest wine no fee 
words describe this kind of love I feel 
inside with no escape one can not hide 

from this the finest Luv.        M.C
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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August 17, 2013 at 11:12 PM
CONGRATS on having your poem featured this week........ Love ~ SKAT ~
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August 17, 2013 at 10:29 PM
Hi Michael, . Congratulations!!! It's nice to see your poem Featured on the soups Home Page, this past week :-) goodnight~ Luv* LINDA *
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August 11, 2013 at 5:07 AM
Hello new member Michael !- Well done, poem. :) - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thank you for choosing to share your poems here with us. - I look forward to reading more in the future. - Have a good time and I wish you luck. - (Give and receive comments) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Coleman Avatar
August 15, 2013 at 8:53 PM
wow that really feels good to have someone like your stuff and can conceive. so like wise and God Seppd that we meet :)
A  Avatar
August 11, 2013 at 3:02 AM
Hi Michael, , your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless..... Hugs* Skat *
Coleman Avatar
August 15, 2013 at 8:57 PM
well a thousand debts my friend and i have to make time for everyone who has took the time out for me so in return.....Thank you and Bless it be.
A   Avatar
August 11, 2013 at 12:04 AM
this is a very fine poem Michael, -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@.....
Coleman Avatar
August 15, 2013 at 8:58 PM
and thank you as well my laddie for opening up to me and pulling me in so bliss
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