Kai Michael Neumann Poet Alliteration

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Wrtten for Silent One's four line poem containing the words Rhapsody Fathomless Eternity Quietus and Story.

The words might lent themselves to a five liner, however life flows over the margins of structure, as does poetry and stories' narration.

When the final curtain falls, the rhapsody has exhausted all emotions.

 

 

The Final Story

The Final Story

A ragged rhapsody ruminates in relentless repetition as the fathomless

fugitive foments fearful fragmentation thus ethereal eternity engulfs

egregious expropriation of quietus’s quiver quaking querulous quickstep’s

quest when stories surreptitiously seep silently seduced by savourless sadness

27th March 2018

Written for all my friends who suffer from depression

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Line Gauthier April 3, 2018 at 4:11 PM Awesome alliteration. Love it. Congrats on your most deserving win.

Susan Ashley April 2, 2018 at 9:03 PM Returning with congratulations Kai, for your fine win with your expressive alliteration. Warmest wishes.. Kai Michael Neumann April 3, 2018 at 3:17 AM Thank you Susan. Many wishes back to you, Kai

Eve Roper April 2, 2018 at 1:32 PM Wonderful work! I so enjoyed and loved it! Congratulations on your win in the alliteration contest... Hugs Eve ~`* Kai Michael Neumann April 3, 2018 at 3:16 AM Thank you Eve. Hugs and Happy Belated Easter wishes, Kai

Probir Gupta April 1, 2018 at 10:37 PM Deep words with a wealth of alliteration ... not an easy job ... Congratulations on your nice win ... Kai Michael Neumann April 2, 2018 at 3:48 AM Thank you Probir. Many wishes to you, Kai

Anne-Lise Andresen April 1, 2018 at 3:13 PM - The winners are named and it was great to see your poem on the winning list - Congratulations, Kai :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Kai Michael Neumann April 2, 2018 at 3:46 AM Thank you Sunshine Smile. I appreciate that.

Silent One April 1, 2018 at 3:10 PM Depression is a difficult condition not understood by so many.. An important poem with good use of alliteration, just felt it was a bit short to finish higher.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest... Kai Michael Neumann April 2, 2018 at 3:45 AM Thank you Silent One.

Freddie Robinson Jr. March 31, 2018 at 8:54 AM Cool alliteration, Kai. Conquered my depression thru Christ. But hey, what can't the LORD do. You used the whole bag of downer words in this morose beaut. Mighty fine poetry, my dear friend. Love and peace always. Kai Michael Neumann April 1, 2018 at 3:58 AM Thank you so much Freddie. I am beginning to like alliterations. A year ago I did not even know what they were. Surfing the soup has become a great friend of mine. I might be believing in a different Lord, but the Universe is a great master...Many Easter wishes to you and love and peace, Kai Freddie Robinson Jr. March 31, 2018 at 8:58 AM Btw ... here is a serene soothing song to listen to whenever the blues wanna get you down. "Aunt Thursday" by Darrell Barnes. Enjoy my talented poetic friend. Love and more love always. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Wrh4fY0i-zI

James Marshall Goff March 28, 2018 at 9:11 AM Kai, as I join others who battle depression my only tool that works has been letting go & giving my power to a Higher Being, Jesus, I advocate for myself only, and pray for others, great poem! Kai Michael Neumann March 28, 2018 at 10:47 AM Thank you James. I am not religious as such, but the question 'what would Jesus do?' is an important one. And I also believe in a Higher Power - spiritually - I guess. Letting go handing over...And I learnt about such Higher Power, when I stopped drinking. Many wishes to you, Kai

Susan Ashley March 28, 2018 at 8:37 AM So very sad Kai yet so beautifully expressed in your amazing, alliterative poetic lines of compelling emotion and imagery. Best wishes in the contest! ~Susan Susan Ashley March 28, 2018 at 11:11 AM In play there is inspiration, creativity, discovery and joy! Kai Michael Neumann March 28, 2018 at 10:45 AM Thank you Susan. Alliterations can be fun. Sometimes I just want to play with the words like a child or so...

FJ Thomas March 27, 2018 at 3:43 PM Kai an excellent alliteration! You should enter it in the alliteration contest going on right now! Kai Michael Neumann March 28, 2018 at 3:08 AM Thank you Shadow of the Past. I had not noticed the alliteration contest and have entered the poem now. A good and poetic day to you, Kai

Line Gauthier March 27, 2018 at 8:20 AM well done, Kai. A beautiful alliteration. Kai Michael Neumann March 28, 2018 at 3:08 AM Thank you.