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The Final Story

The Final Story

A ragged rhapsody ruminates in relentless repetition as the fathomless

fugitive foments fearful fragmentation thus ethereal eternity engulfs

egregious expropriation of quietus’s quiver quaking querulous quickstep’s

quest when stories surreptitiously seep silently seduced by savourless sadness

27th March 2018

Written for all my friends who suffer from depression

Copyright © Kai Michael Neumann | Year Posted 2018

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Line Gauthier Date: 4/3/2018 4:11:00 PM Awesome alliteration. Love it. Congrats on your most deserving win. Login to Reply

Susan Ashley Date: 4/2/2018 9:03:00 PM Returning with congratulations Kai, for your fine win with your expressive alliteration. Warmest wishes.. Login to Reply Kai Michael Neumann Date: 4/3/2018 3:17:00 AM Thank you Susan. Many wishes back to you, Kai

Eve Roper Date: 4/2/2018 1:32:00 PM Wonderful work! I so enjoyed and loved it! Congratulations on your win in the alliteration contest... Hugs Eve ~`* Login to Reply Kai Michael Neumann Date: 4/3/2018 3:16:00 AM Thank you Eve. Hugs and Happy Belated Easter wishes, Kai

Probir Gupta Date: 4/1/2018 10:37:00 PM Deep words with a wealth of alliteration ... not an easy job ... Congratulations on your nice win ... Login to Reply Kai Michael Neumann Date: 4/2/2018 3:48:00 AM Thank you Probir. Many wishes to you, Kai

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/1/2018 3:13:00 PM - The winners are named and it was great to see your poem on the winning list - Congratulations, Kai :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Kai Michael Neumann Date: 4/2/2018 3:46:00 AM Thank you Sunshine Smile. I appreciate that.

Silent One Date: 4/1/2018 3:10:00 PM Depression is a difficult condition not understood by so many.. An important poem with good use of alliteration, just felt it was a bit short to finish higher.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest... Login to Reply Kai Michael Neumann Date: 4/2/2018 3:45:00 AM Thank you Silent One.

Freddie Robinson Jr. Date: 3/31/2018 8:54:00 AM Cool alliteration, Kai. Conquered my depression thru Christ. But hey, what can't the LORD do. You used the whole bag of downer words in this morose beaut. Mighty fine poetry, my dear friend. Love and peace always. Login to Reply Kai Michael Neumann Date: 4/1/2018 3:58:00 AM Thank you so much Freddie. I am beginning to like alliterations. A year ago I did not even know what they were. Surfing the soup has become a great friend of mine. I might be believing in a different Lord, but the Universe is a great master...Many Easter wishes to you and love and peace, Kai Freddie Robinson Jr. Date: 3/31/2018 8:58:00 AM Btw ... here is a serene soothing song to listen to whenever the blues wanna get you down. "Aunt Thursday" by Darrell Barnes. Enjoy my talented poetic friend. Love and more love always. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Wrh4fY0i-zI

James Marshall Goff Date: 3/28/2018 9:11:00 AM Kai, as I join others who battle depression my only tool that works has been letting go & giving my power to a Higher Being, Jesus, I advocate for myself only, and pray for others, great poem! Login to Reply Kai Michael Neumann Date: 3/28/2018 10:47:00 AM Thank you James. I am not religious as such, but the question 'what would Jesus do?' is an important one. And I also believe in a Higher Power - spiritually - I guess. Letting go handing over...And I learnt about such Higher Power, when I stopped drinking. Many wishes to you, Kai

Susan Ashley Date: 3/28/2018 8:37:00 AM So very sad Kai yet so beautifully expressed in your amazing, alliterative poetic lines of compelling emotion and imagery. Best wishes in the contest! ~Susan Login to Reply Susan Ashley Date: 3/28/2018 11:11:00 AM In play there is inspiration, creativity, discovery and joy! Kai Michael Neumann Date: 3/28/2018 10:45:00 AM Thank you Susan. Alliterations can be fun. Sometimes I just want to play with the words like a child or so...

FJ Thomas Date: 3/27/2018 3:43:00 PM Kai an excellent alliteration! You should enter it in the alliteration contest going on right now! Login to Reply Kai Michael Neumann Date: 3/28/2018 3:08:00 AM Thank you Shadow of the Past. I had not noticed the alliteration contest and have entered the poem now. A good and poetic day to you, Kai

Line Gauthier Date: 3/27/2018 8:20:00 AM well done, Kai. A beautiful alliteration. Login to Reply Kai Michael Neumann Date: 3/28/2018 3:08:00 AM Thank you.