The Final Ride

He sat straight up in the saddle,
tired, no sweat left in him
as he hadn’t drunk a drop
for days.  The white salt ring
left on his skin and the
horses neck were crusty, itchy,
stale smelling.  He was tough
as weathered leather, taking
his last ride, the last mile,
the last day, saying goodbye
as he rode away.  He was no 
slouch, he would sit straight
up until he could no longer
hold his head.  The horse 
collapsed, dead from exhaustion,
dehydration, refusing to leave 
his life long companion.  With
a snap, the rope tightened as
the cowboy fell towards his
horse, the final ride over, his
final prayer answered, to
ride forever with his friend.




created 16 Jan 2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Leffanta Avatar
July 31, 2021 at 11:35 AM
Aha! "Ghost riders in the sky!"
Alex Avatar
July 31, 2021 at 5:57 AM
This is beautifully narrated writing with a very friendly as well as satiric theme.
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