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The Final Letter

Dear Lover... I struggle to gulp the scorn you poured. My mouth parched, desperate for a sip of your love. A taste of your lips. Your engagement- an abomination. Our relationship still floods the plains of my memory. Surges storming in my inner soul. Questions bamboozle my mind. So, your affection was a mere hoax. I, the halloween freak? Your tender touch, in fact a thump? Our turgid, rose in bloom. A flaccid, comatose weed? I cherish our unending summertime. I crowned, knighted& sainted your passion. And you scorn me? My Love, make no attempt to flee. I will find you, her and your fragrant bliss. A reeking carcass I will leave. The pathetic yearning for the warmth of your suave flame, Is dead. And the need to draw blood, Resides. ...with love, Your Real Bride. For Dictionary fun...#1...Delilah`s words contest.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/16/2013 7:24:00 AM
love gone bad......I like the sign off at the end...... your real bride. This drips with so much regret....The raw emotions bring out the best in this poem.
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Date: 12/10/2012 5:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your HM Yvette love xx
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Date: 12/10/2012 12:24:00 AM
Beautiful write - heartbreakingly sad. I love how you've written it in letter form. And the way you've signed it 'your real bride'-thought provoking. Very well done Yvette!
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Yvette Lisa Ndlovu
Date: 12/10/2012 2:36:00 AM
Thanks :)
Date: 12/9/2012 1:45:00 PM
Y Lisa, ... love the "Dictionary fun" here.... Congratulations (-: always~&~forever :-) PD
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Yvette Lisa Ndlovu
Date: 12/10/2012 2:56:00 AM
Thank you:)
Date: 12/4/2012 5:35:00 PM
Yvette, this is beautiful....always~PD
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Date: 12/3/2012 11:20:00 PM
amazing write Yvette,,, congratulation for the contest...:) <3 SK
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Yvette Lisa Ndlovu
Date: 12/4/2012 6:55:00 AM
Thank you very much SK!

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