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Inspired by the painting The Fighting Temeraire by JMW Turner

The Fighting Temeraire I lead this Queen to a guillotine She follows me with dignity and grace all English oak and 98 guns. I am an unsuitable escort for my Lady, my low born coarseness, the effort of towing her punctuated by upward belches and grinding grunts, I am unbecoming as a royal guard but she is silent, already haunted She no longer flies the Union Jack as she did in battle but a white flag of sale and surrender She is no longer adorned by ornament or armament She will never again feel a storm fight to strip her sails from her body in violent passion her clothes have been sold In her nakedness, she is ethereal but I am aware of Temeraire’s glorious past The Battle of Trafalgar; She swept to the side of the wounded HMS Victory, and through intrepid maneuvers and savage fighting, saved the shattered Victory from certain death, and took two ships hostage. But today, the sun sets in the distance on the days of elegant, tall-masted warships There are streaks of red in the sky and sea, that match the streaks of red on her deck, that can’t be washed away I’ve been paid a purse of coin to escort her to the other side. As I am reluctantly relieved of the tow ropes that bind us, I hope that pieces of her live on somewhere In tribute to the Fighting Temeraine.

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Date: 2/21/2024 5:51:00 PM
this just may be my favourite of yours so far, keep it up
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Date: 2/22/2024 7:41:00 AM
Thank you Francine! It's my latest, and my first attempt with a ekphrasis poem. The painting itself is haunting.

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