Judith Ao Poet Rhyme

The Fight Within

We often strangle ourselves within,
Quietly, choked and suffocated within. 
Dare no one can read it,
Not even a close one dared to feel it.
The load that has been weighing heavy,
The grueling and strenuous task to carry. 
We ignore the pain and soreness to feel less petrified. 
No one sees how much we have sacrificed. 
To bridle the feeling and win the fight within.

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Byeol Captain March 4, 2025 at 1:42 AM So true, I can totally relate. You have expressed the feeling in a nice poetic way. Judith Ao March 6, 2025 at 9:26 PM Thank you so much for your comment.

Beata Agustin July 20, 2024 at 4:36 AM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed. Judith Ao July 20, 2024 at 6:36 AM Thank you so much for your comment on my poem.. thank you for sharing the verse.. Praise the Lord.