The Fig Leaf Removed

There I am, laid bare on a slab of steel
undone by my Achilles' heel,
A Mayan priest's obsidian blade,
or a sultry siren's silent serenade

There I am, placenta draped and screaming
Awoken from my embryonic dreaming
Beckoned forth to join the woeful parade
And make a cameo for a few accolades

There I am, full of zeal and glee
Despite all my idiosyncrasies 
Overly amorous and under prepared
But going ahead unimpaired

There I am, washed of my daily grime
resetting all the usual paradigms
Readying myself for the Sisyphean chore
of another day I can not ignore
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Onclaud Avatar
November 17, 2016 at 10:20 AM
mystical , trey.. big congrats your win..huggs
Hamner Avatar
November 18, 2016 at 1:36 AM
Thank you, Nette.
Roper Avatar
November 17, 2016 at 10:08 AM
Trey, good imagery congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
Hamner Avatar
November 18, 2016 at 1:36 AM
Thank you, Eve.
La France Avatar
November 16, 2016 at 2:53 PM
Trey Congratulations on your win in the contest with this skillful write~
Hamner Avatar
November 16, 2016 at 10:43 PM
Thank you very much.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 16, 2016 at 2:09 PM
Congrats, Trey!
Lamoureux Avatar
November 16, 2016 at 10:19 AM
This is one of my personal favorited in the contest. Congrats.
Hamner Avatar
November 16, 2016 at 10:26 AM
Wow, thank you very much Richard.
Carmack Avatar
November 14, 2016 at 1:49 AM
I like what you have done here Trey.
Hamner Avatar
November 14, 2016 at 11:31 PM
Thank you, Rob.
Goff Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 7:21 PM
Trey, I enjoy the original layout of your embryonic time-sequencing, dreamy, yet real....thank you! jimbo
Hamner Avatar
November 13, 2016 at 3:39 AM
Thanks, Jimbo!
Stover Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 1:15 AM
This is poetry at its best.
Hamner Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 1:27 AM
Thank you very much, I appreciate your kind comment.
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