The Fifth House

Got Venus in my heart Got Saturn spinning in my mind All those lessons learned All that love denied Got battles never fought Got wars never won Was too afraid to conquer ‘em Was too afraid to move on Got Mars in my heart Got Raphael on my shoulder Got Jupiter pulling me To a place that is warmer Got Pluto in my eyes Putting transformation in sight Got Uranus in my spirit Making individuality advised Got Mercury in my throat Giving me the strength to speak Got Neptune over my head and in my dreams Got all these strengths Just like everyone else Got love for myself and everyone in my fifth house. Kale Brereton July 8,2018

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Date: 7/11/2018 3:56:00 PM
I enjoyed reading this creative poem today Kale! Well written. :)
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Kale Brereton
Date: 7/13/2018 9:37:00 AM
Haha thank you!! Thought I would try something new :)
Date: 7/8/2018 9:09:00 PM
Kale.. Tonight, the mountain sky is clear. In a few hours the stars will tease me with their winks. The twilight is for your poem, and it's as enjoyable as the coming sunset!
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Date: 7/9/2018 8:01:00 AM
Thank you so much for the beautiful comment! It made my day! I have checked out some of your work before and I am thrilled to have a writer of your caliber give me such a compliment. It made my day! Hope you have an amazing day and enjoy that mountain view!!
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