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The Fiery Rose

A collaboration with my brother-in-law, Andrew Pennell (AJP) The fiery rose is my blossoming love God's love is like the fiery, passionate rose that I give you gratefully My love is strong and mighty like a graceful knight The fire on the scarlet rose is the strength of my love The rose is the rock of the base that I hand to you as a beloved gift You are my rock that supports me and you never crumble into sand The redness of your cheeks - it blossoms so sweet, so eloquently, so lovely with wild passion. You built me up with your avalanching grace and sacred wisdom Our love keeps on scorching enthusiastically Like a black and white checkered stallion by the name of Spirit of Delight You brought us together like a complicated puzzle Our bond is stronger than the finest steel on Earth You enrapture me with your pure beauty, glowing aflame with fire licks and fireworks The fiery rose will be your bouquet of stars in no time This time spent with each other eye to eye is simply sublime Stars do sparkle bright when you walk and run by my side always and forever You repaired my state of mind... I'm astonished by your fantastic flight God has concealed our love in a safe dwelling called Heavenly Haven The Lord has preserved it like a rose, burning intensely and gloriously in a glass globe

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/25/2014 5:56:00 PM
A fine joint write. I say bravo to both writers!! My love is strong and mighty like a graceful knight The fire on the scarlet rose is the strength of my love I particularly loved this part! "The rose is the rock of the base that I hand to you as a beloved gift You are my rock that supports me and you never crumble into sand" Bravo and bravo...
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Date: 5/19/2014 6:57:00 PM
Wonderful Wonderful Wonderful collab. I, of course, cannot tell who wrote what and I think that's cool. It may mean you share similar muses with Andrew. Cool stuff, really.
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