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The Fervor of Our Love

dizzy, from my shameless lust  i paint your mouth with mine. nipping, brushing faces,  breathing you like oxygen. my fingers, my lips, my tongue  upon your naked back draw a map to my destination  via the scenic route no doubt starving  for your wet lips.  make a meal of this Lost in the carnage of our intimacy. I move with the fervor of a ravenous beast.  Your body undulates to the movement of my mania.  Juices glow like the fountain of youth. I move in and out  conduct a symphony of pleasure,  bury my face deep  in the sweet skin of creation.  waltz against a canvas dark pin holes of silver dust. weightless  in a friction free atmosphere  eternal pleasure, a sweet honeysuckle taste  a foreplay crescendo.   I the ocean,  tide after tide  the ebb and flow a sculptured reef.  The screams of seagulls in the air,  rushing waters eternal  breaking hard and fast   the sunken coral. a multitude of tidal waves simultaneous explosions  tight as one we hold freeze in the heat of our moment. It must be an hour now  you are lying at my side.  your head on my chest.  I play with your hair  stroke your flesh our eyes meet,  we kiss  long, hard passionately...
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Dietrich Avatar
March 15, 2015 at 6:40 PM
wow and there is after play too?? Amazing, Armand! You must be one heck of a lover! this is another wonderful passionate poem from your pen. I was looking for an oldie I'd not seen and found one on my first click!! Yet another fave! (sure hope you are ok. Send me a soupie sometime).
A   Avatar
September 17, 2014 at 12:52 PM
Maurice, a beautiful and passionate picture you paint. Enjoy the tidal waves... Linda
Chircop Avatar
September 17, 2014 at 10:34 AM
Sensual,sultry, fervent, but mostly beautiful !!Charma
Allison Avatar
September 16, 2014 at 3:36 PM
Phaworrrrrr ... passionate pulsating - phenomenal write Maurice:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Yvonne Avatar
September 16, 2014 at 5:45 PM
thank you Jan.
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