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The Feral Mind’s Fibonacci Dream



"The Feral Mind’s Fibonacci Dream"

The true lamp of the heart 
knows where and where not to roam
It hides its secrets, yet shares its open songs 
like a Fibonacci shell held to the ears
whispering like an ocean Life sailed
gathers us all up and back in again
its heart whispering requests like tithes
our soft fortunes, it captures all souls 
that hard and fast, sink and rise, 
slowly we crawl, well salted
rhymes slide along wet tongues
lips to cups whisper dreams 
drugged like prayers in silent communion
unheard strange language misunderstood
worldly yet their true meaning truly forgotten
each day tides high and drowning knowledge low
treacherous depths are intuitively followed 
the Sun always rises; the Moon pulls us back in
by open hearts towards the Always Known —  
some keys unlock the unknown way home
back into the ocean the closed are thrown,
they think they are alone
fish for new schools of thought
something of meaning rolls over-and-over 
lost in the grasping wanting moments,
submerged we rise again in the wake
until we swim back up again sharp teeth 
into Love’s light-strung net, feral minds
treasures sought each thought a jewel
the poetic savored and kept;
words followed like bait 
are never alone.

No ocean is without a shore 
its undulating song always
calling like a humming siren 
to those rippling minds hypnotic
wading further out than the shallows
to turn around and stand 
in the sands of time
listing reasons at the watermark
those poetic broken waves 
ride us always, back home
to face the grand scheme of things


Candide Diderot. ‘25
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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February 19, 2026 at 1:39 AM
"Changes"/Osbourne.
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February 19, 2026 at 1:39 AM
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZLyWIkMdoS4
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February 7, 2026 at 3:09 AM
This is fantastic! I love the sibilance with the cups, tongues and whispering. I love how you play around with schools of fish and bait, and ending on "the grand scheme of things" is a great send off of this poem into the world.
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February 19, 2026 at 1:40 AM
Thank you.
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February 5, 2026 at 12:52 AM
“What is a poet? An unhappy man who hides deep anguish in his heart, but whose lips are so formed that when the sigh and cry pass through them, it sounds like lovely music.... And people flock around the poet and say: 'Sing again soon' - that is, 'May new sufferings torment your soul but your lips be fashioned as before, for the cry would only frighten us, but the music, that is blissful.” Soren Kierkegaard, Either - Or
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February 6, 2026 at 3:29 AM
https://www.britannica.com/biography/Soren-Kierkegaard
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February 5, 2026 at 12:57 AM
This 1 is for you: .............................................................................. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rZtcJmJE-TM
Sidwell Avatar
February 2, 2026 at 1:45 PM
Great concept and fantastic poem!
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February 5, 2026 at 12:53 AM
Thank you.
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December 24, 2025 at 5:37 AM
"Did I Not Say to You" /Rumi (Original)
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December 24, 2025 at 5:37 AM
https://allpoetry.com/Did-I-Not-Say-To-You
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December 24, 2025 at 5:12 AM
Rumi: The Poem That God Whispered to Rumi (Sufi Poetry & Music)
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December 24, 2025 at 5:12 AM
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eV5aH1D6X6E
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