The Feeling of Death

When someone dies 
who is close to us
they take a piece 
of an essence 
of ourself 
that we never had to name before.


We never had to 
think about this unfamiliar
up-and-down-in-and-out
feeling

Because it 
never
existed, and
was never felt,
and thus could
have never
been mentioned

The death feeling, 
which is 
totally, utterly taboo
and almost exclusively
one-of-a-kind

I never
realized it
was there 
until 
you
came 
up
missing
through that
awfulness 
called
death.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 4/4/2019 7:24:00 AM
That whole first verse is a poem in itself! It snagged me and wouldn't let go. Very true.
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Date: 4/4/2019 8:28:00 AM
Thank you. I see you know.
Date: 4/4/2019 5:46:00 AM
exciting
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Date: 4/4/2019 8:28:00 AM
Thank you my friend; glad to see you here today!
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