The Feathers of Love

The feathers of love

they say that
february is the month of love
and it is pretty lovely
to know 
that
its color is starting
to paint the serenity
and 
its feathers are flapping
the beauty

we all carry
such feathers
the feathers of love
gentle
subtle

if only
we would perch
the feathers of love
on this lovely world
and let them
paint 
and
blossom
it would be 
endless sunrise
and 
timeless sunset

and i confess
that
nothing is more elegant
to see one
is touched by
at least
a piece 
or
buried ourselves
amidst
the feathers of love

~(c) Sukmawati Komala~
Feb 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 3/12/2014 6:29:00 AM
Lovely poem...and the final lines say it all. // paul
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Sukmawati Komala
Date: 4/25/2014 1:08:00 AM
thank you so much deary Paul Callus.. such a blessing to read your great comment.. and i do wish all is well with you.. much love and light :) Sk
Date: 3/4/2014 9:46:00 PM
Interesting take on love here. Love can be like a feather - lightly landing on the heart. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Sukmawati Komala
Date: 4/25/2014 1:10:00 AM
Thank you so much deary Matthew Anish.. such a blessing to read your encouraging comment.. appreciate so much.. wishing you a great day :) Sk
Date: 2/9/2014 8:42:00 AM
A soft colorful petal blooming along with other petals remains buried like in the flower itself. Beautiful thoughts, my lovely sis. Loved always, bl
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Sukmawati Komala
Date: 2/10/2014 10:17:00 AM
thank you deary Devnath.. how are you.. hope everything is well... :) so pleased to see you :)
Date: 2/6/2014 7:27:00 AM
Oh, to bury oneself amidst the feathers of love! Beautiful and a very alluring piece of poem, Sukumawati! hugs
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Sukmawati Komala
Date: 2/8/2014 9:44:00 AM
thank you so much dear frind Qautami Phookan.. appreciate much your vist.. may you have a lovely days :) :) :) Sk
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