The Feathered Fan

A beautiful fan of many a hue,
Feathers adorn it when opened, so
gently cooling the air with a graceful swoop,
When your subtle wrist moves to and fro.

Was Mamgu’s fan when she was young,
When to a ball she did go.
Hiding her face in a coy pose,
Yet eyeing you slyly, thinking, you didn’t know.

Gracefully dancing eyes lowered to the ground,
Fan to her face to hide the smile,
When dancing a cotillion with partners of four
Hands just touching heart racing a mile.

The fan held the key to their romance
Sliding it to her cheek she was saying, “I want you”
Holding it opened, covering the mouth.  
“I belong to no-one, am here for you”..


Feathers 

Penned 05/08/2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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A   Avatar
September 2, 2014 at 11:26 AM
nice reply..Linda
Ayala Avatar
August 20, 2014 at 12:50 AM
Beautiful write! Congratulations on a well-deserved win! Regards, Kika
Roberts Avatar
August 20, 2014 at 1:37 AM
Thank you Kika, glad you enjoyed it ...Seren
Gibson Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 8:13 PM
Love this, Seren...the language of the fan. Congratulations on your win.
Mehta Avatar
August 18, 2014 at 5:30 AM
Nice emotional write, Congrats on the win, Giorgio
Roberts Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 1:07 PM
thin k you have got muddled with names here just like Nette, I wonder what I will be called next lol....Seren
Onclaud Avatar
August 18, 2014 at 1:32 AM
so deeply expressed, faye.. applause to you!
Roberts Avatar
August 18, 2014 at 2:47 AM
Hmmm netter not sure if these congrats are for me but I will say thank you just in case they are....Seren
A   Avatar
August 17, 2014 at 10:19 PM
Seren, Congratulations, in Andrea's sorta Shell, contest:)....Love Linda
Roberts Avatar
August 18, 2014 at 2:47 AM
Thank you Linda ..... Seren
Allison Avatar
August 17, 2014 at 5:43 PM
wonderful imagery many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
Roberts Avatar
August 17, 2014 at 7:15 PM
Hi Jan thanks for your kind words....Seren
Dietrich Avatar
August 17, 2014 at 5:28 PM
Seren, for some reason, as I read this, I was imagining it was written by an Asian or something. I don't know why. the mother of the poem just seemed so delicate and womanly like I envision a woman from the east to be. oh, and the name Mamgu. You sure fooled me with that one. Was this a real story of your mom?? The more I think of this one, the more I like it, the ending was so delightful. Congrats for your win in my contest.
Roberts Avatar
August 17, 2014 at 7:19 PM
Mamgu is grandmother in welsh , purely fictional Andrea, Haha so you think I am not delicate and womanly, hmmmm. Have a vivid imagination at times Andrea, plus good old google giving me hints to the way a fan talks. Glad you approved.....Seren
Guzzi Avatar
August 17, 2014 at 2:20 PM
Ah yes feathered fans, a ladylike lure so unlike today's micro mini's LOL Congrad's on Your win!! Light & Love
Roberts Avatar
August 17, 2014 at 7:20 PM
Thanks Debbie would have liked to have lived in those times I think.....Seren
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