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Fluttering, drifting to and fro it soars it dances in the mighty wind it twirls, it swirls There upon a sheer jagged rocky cliff an Appaloosa horse of many colors stands majestic There under this blazing azure sky an Ojibwa girl looks at the beautiful land of Canada There in the mighty wind that roars a feather lost from her raven hair, quietly moves There far below the Ottawa River thunders and the vast lands of wilderness stretch to the horizon There above in a perfect sky eagles soar, symbolizing "The Peoples" strength There in my spirit dream the only sound is the wind that moves my feather Fluttering, drifting to and fro it soars it dances in the mighty wind it twirls, it swirls _______________________ December 9, 2012 Poetry/Verse/The Feather Copyright Protected, ID 12- 441-546-09 All Rights Reserved, 2012, Constance La France

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Date: 12/10/2012 1:38:00 PM
wow, just awesome write here, Constance
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Date: 12/9/2012 12:09:00 PM
This is such a beautiful and a gorgeous write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this incredible and exciting verse this afternoon! You moved me with your tender words within this illustrious poem! Great Work!!
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Date: 12/9/2012 10:45:00 AM
This is so beautiful , what a journey for a feather xx
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Date: 12/9/2012 9:00:00 AM
gentle words with potent imagery and spectacular vision and presentation Constance .. only a dear heart could write of elegant beauty my friend .. so luv all your poems ..
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Date: 12/9/2012 8:49:00 AM
What a beautiful verse,,,,thank you for fluttering your beautiful feather..so lovely..<3<3<3 SK
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