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The Feather

The warm summer breeze
Holds me floating, briefly still
Just a gentle breath
Sends me tumbling once again
Where it takes me, I shall go









Contest : ANY 2011 POEM with any theme or form max 12 lines 
Placement : 3rd

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Poet Destroyer A

March 2, 2012 at 10:06 PM

NICK..READING UP ON SOME OLD CONTEST* CONGRATULATIONS~ WITH YOUR AWESOME WIN! ;-)*always..pd

Bob Quigley

January 6, 2012 at 1:51 PM

Very nicely done Nick. Congratulations

Jon Arno

January 6, 2012 at 9:36 AM

Congratulations Nick on your outstanding write. Have a great day. Jon

Carol Sunshine Brown

January 6, 2012 at 7:04 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand's "Any 2011 Poem" contest Nick. Love, Carol

Louis Rams

August 26, 2011 at 6:21 PM

some times we would like to be like a feather blown in the wind high above our selves. i love the flow of this write.

The Fringe

August 19, 2011 at 11:55 PM

Insightful meaning. I see you are courageous. It's no easy feat to do this. It means one must leave the road well trodden. I think this is your meaning. If so, you are my brother. If not, you're still my brother of words and deep meanings. Either way, I liked this one a lot.

Matthew Anish

August 19, 2011 at 4:22 PM

Sweet Tanka! Thank you for pointing out my typo. I think I changed the word ectasy as well. Peace & blessings Matthew Anish

Nette Onclaud

August 11, 2011 at 1:07 PM

how flowing this is with matching imaginative imagery.. my kind of poetry, nick..:) huggs, nette

Carol Sunshine Brown

August 11, 2011 at 10:21 AM

Your poetry has amazed me today Nick. Thank you for posting it for us all to read and enjoy. Hoping you have a wonderful inspiration filled day. Love, Carol