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The Feather

The warm summer breeze Holds me floating, briefly still Just a gentle breath Sends me tumbling once again Where it takes me, I shall go Contest : ANY 2011 POEM with any theme or form max 12 lines Placement : 3rd

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/2/2012 10:06:00 PM
NICK..READING UP ON SOME OLD CONTEST* CONGRATULATIONS~ WITH YOUR AWESOME WIN! ;-)*always..pd
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Date: 1/6/2012 1:51:00 PM
Very nicely done Nick. Congratulations
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Date: 1/6/2012 9:36:00 AM
Congratulations Nick on your outstanding write. Have a great day. Jon
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Date: 1/6/2012 7:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand's "Any 2011 Poem" contest Nick. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/26/2011 6:21:00 PM
some times we would like to be like a feather blown in the wind high above our selves. i love the flow of this write.
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Date: 8/19/2011 11:55:00 PM
Insightful meaning. I see you are courageous. It's no easy feat to do this. It means one must leave the road well trodden. I think this is your meaning. If so, you are my brother. If not, you're still my brother of words and deep meanings. Either way, I liked this one a lot.
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Date: 8/19/2011 4:22:00 PM
Sweet Tanka! Thank you for pointing out my typo. I think I changed the word ectasy as well. Peace & blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 8/11/2011 1:07:00 PM
how flowing this is with matching imaginative imagery.. my kind of poetry, nick..:) huggs, nette
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Date: 8/11/2011 10:21:00 AM
Your poetry has amazed me today Nick. Thank you for posting it for us all to read and enjoy. Hoping you have a wonderful inspiration filled day. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/10/2011 11:26:00 AM
this was awesome nicely done. cory
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Date: 8/10/2011 10:03:00 AM
Lovely pen picture of a free life, Nick
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