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While my spirit is feeble for managing, my soul can. Each birth and death occurred throughout one's lifespan. Undoubtedly, pride and ego inspirations are useless. I've isolated myself from the remainder of the universe. They have irreversibly shattered our deep vulnerability. Nothing is easily recognizable under modern tyranny.  They have consisted of distinct pieces of information. Prioritize their philosophy above the dome of reputation. The gap between rough and delicate is sole sharpness. We're stranded in the great Earth's space, breathless. The sky is proved pristine and pure, while Earth is a struggle The Earth has not arisen as a result of the sky's sparkle. Mists that are dull and drift float gently into the horizon. Sneaking around for one mass of pride amidst wizen. The act of pillorying is done to embrace the ignored. I modestly provide advice to those that are rejected. This description illustrates what I mean by extortion. This is the foundation for my inexplicable suspicion. Our choices have a solid relationship with the chance. He was also injured by the tough probe enhance.
Written: July 31, 2021 Anything You Want - Must Be New Poem Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Chantelle Anne Cooke

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Date: 8/2/2021 7:55:00 AM
WOW!!! Congratulations on your win. What a creative/deep-story/write and picture. I enjoyed it. Have a blessed day writing away..................
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Date: 8/2/2021 2:03:00 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this philosophical thought, expressed in your awesome poetic style. I admit that my knowledge of the "fathomless abyss" is biblically-based. God bless you.
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Date: 8/2/2021 1:36:00 AM
WoW!Lasaad, I see why you made the winner’s list. This is so deep and thought-provoking. Excellent job. Congratulations on a well deserved:-) Alexis
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Date: 8/1/2021 1:30:00 PM
thought provoking piece Lasaad, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/1/2021 2:43:00 PM
Thanks, Jan, for your kind words and wonderful thoughts, Blessings and warm hugs.
Date: 8/1/2021 1:23:00 PM
Hello Lasaad; quote (if you gaze long enough into an abyss, the abyss will gaze back into you). so said the great German philosopher Friedrich Nietzsche, and one can see in this searching poem just what he meant, very deep and meaningful, just what I love, cheers David
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Date: 8/1/2021 2:49:00 PM
I appreciate your lovely comments, David, and the profound Frederick Nietzche quotation that adds to the poem's appeal. I'm pleased you enjoy it, and even more so because our points of view often coincide with my very best regards, my good friend.
Date: 8/1/2021 5:48:00 AM
You always ponder depths of your thoughts, Lassad. All the best for the contest.
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Date: 8/1/2021 9:32:00 AM
Thank you so much, Vijay; your comments are always uplifting and appreciated. My best regards, my friend.
Date: 8/1/2021 2:14:00 AM
Quite a deep and thought provoking verse Lasaad, I know this will do well. Enjoy your weekend Tom
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Date: 8/1/2021 5:06:00 AM
Thank you very much, Tom. I'm pleased you could portray the limitless abyss, and thank you for your nice observations. Best wishes and blessings for a wonderful weekend
Date: 8/1/2021 12:33:00 AM
This contest inspires some interesting poetry...Good luck in the contest...Delice
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Date: 8/1/2021 5:07:00 AM
Thank you Delice, appreciate your kind words. Have a great weekend
Date: 7/31/2021 10:32:00 PM
A deep poem that requires much thought especially since imagery and emotion intermix so well. Best for a win.
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Date: 8/1/2021 5:16:00 AM
I'm sure you could portray the limitless abyss, Victor, since you put the finger on the intermix of imagery and emotion. Thanks for your kind words, my friend.
Date: 7/31/2021 9:45:00 PM
I love the way you weave words into structured lines, Lasaad. The imagery always stops me and makes me ponder what I cannot know...that is, what is in the mind of the poet when the words are penned. Good stuff, my friend.
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Date: 8/1/2021 5:23:00 AM
Thank you very much, Milton; your comments are so inspiring and uplifting, and they add to the appeal of my poem. Indeed, you were able to depict the infinite void where some secret epoch lurks. Have a great weekend. 

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