The Fate of a Soldier

It was a special day and he’d hardly said his vows
When some gory militants struck in the northern part,
The groom’s suit he replaced with the soldier’s uniform
And the merry radiance faded to reflect his troubled heart. 

As the journey north spiraled into the prickly thickets
He still heard the cheery songs cut short by the duty’s call,
The charm of his newly-wed’s kiss hung on his drying lips
And still could hear the echoing claps of those in the hall.

“The soldier’s portion is as bitter as gall…”
He thought as the precarious road got rougher.
The soldier must pay for the civilians’ peace,
By being self-denying, and sacrificially tougher.

And so our soldier and his mates were ambushed
By the enemy fire that caught them by surprise.
The newly-wed wife anxiously awaited the news
Of the operation that led to her hubby’s demise.

This unfortunate guy’s fate is what a soldier daily faces
Simply to guarantee the civilian the happiness he chases.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 8/10/2016 3:48:00 AM
Sometimes we take things for granted and this poem grew my appreciation for hard working soldiers and their families who support them and wait patiently for their return.
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Date: 8/7/2015 9:04:00 PM
Amazing how many times this scenario plays out. It is great to know that sometimes he returns to her. It helps to know that sometimes their fate is not sealed! Emotional write!
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Date: 7/21/2015 2:17:00 AM
G'day Hannington... it is a pleasure to read a poem nicely constructed like this one. The topic is certainly fitting in these troubled times - regards - Lindsay
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Date: 7/20/2015 10:57:00 AM
Ohh, I like it. Yeah, they go out there and never know!
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Grace Wagler
Date: 8/11/2015 6:34:00 PM
This is very true to the circumstances of soldiers today. Well written and great verbage!
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Hannington Mumo
Date: 7/20/2015 11:03:00 AM
Thanks you for sparing your time and looking at my work. Appreciated.
Date: 7/20/2015 10:39:00 AM
What wonderful words, thank you for asking me to read your work..I have written about a soldiers fight on many occasions.....Seren
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Hannington Mumo
Date: 7/20/2015 10:45:00 AM
Thanks for finding time to read my poem. I appreciate your kind comments....Hannington.
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