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The Fat Man Loses

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The fat man claims to be a man of the world and dances around the stage as if to prove it. The leading lady laughs deliciously and exits arm-in-arm with the thin man~ after all she knows the fat man is a jolly sort and not like normal people with feelings to be considered.

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Date: 2/20/2024 12:03:00 AM
I liked your round about poem of feelings which we all have. These lessons are not learned easily.
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