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Art created by Deborah Guenther Beachboard

The Fat Man Loses

The fat man claims to be a man of the world 
and dances around the stage as if to prove it.
The leading lady laughs deliciously 
and exits arm-in-arm with the thin man~
after all she knows the fat man is a jolly sort 
and not like normal people
with feelings to be considered.
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February 20, 2024 at 12:03 AM
I liked your round about poem of feelings which we all have. These lessons are not learned easily.
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