The Fat Man In the Red Suit

he comming soon
under the moon
he's a old goon
with the toy bloons
so stay tune
listen for his toot
he the
FAT MAN WITHE THE RED SUIT
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Corthell Avatar
November 25, 2011 at 1:50 PM
my fav part about this poem is the last line.also you need to go over you pronounciation and spelling. everyone makes mistakes :)
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