The Fantasy Dance

as I walk into this enchanted building.
the thoughts in my mind plunder.
the sounds of violins playing.
the crystal chandlers sparkling.but wait
there's a beautiful dancing on the ballroom
floor.
she was a beautiful lady with sparkling diamonds,
and a dress that can make say wow!
as she danced,she disappeared.the music stopped,
and she reappeared from no where and music came
back on.
all of a sudden people was in the background.
something puzzled me,where am I at.
what is this place,where did all these people come
from.
and why are they all dressed up.these people are talking
the night away with no worries and dancing too.
as I walk towards to the door.

the girl appears,without hesitation she grabbed my arm.
were the dance floor dancing away.her smiling face.
It made wonder about this,why me?
why did something lead me here.I said you look beautiful
tonight.
she blushed with joy.all sudden the clock struck 12 am
and everything began to disappear.
I asked her for her name.she said thank you?
when she disappear her locket fell down.
her name was rose.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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